Fire Trucks
Fire trucks are big red trucks that put out ferocious fires. They have big sirens on the top to warn people they're coming, so they can get out of the way. They make screechy sounds also. So, if you can't see them from far away, you can hear them. Fire trucks have very expensive equipment. With all that heavy equipment, (and water) the truck can only carry up to 6 people. Fire fighters are heroes.Fire fighters also quickly run inside a burning building to get people who are trapped inside, isn't that just bravery? They do this carefully and most of the time successfully.
2 comments:
Much improved writing.
They make screechy..also. So, if you can't..
heavy equipment and water, the truck..
Eliminate: one more thing and in my point of view.. This is YOUR essay anyway.
..isn't that just bravery?
I like your descriptive paragraph!
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