questions 7-9

7. This story is going to have a funny, gentle, serious, and upsetting tone all in one at different times.


8. " Welcome to the last swimming competition this year, our seniors here at Jordon High School will be leaving us in about three weeks." Said the announcer as he bursted through the speaker.
"So we would like to say congratulations to all of the students graduating this year." Announced the cp ho- host of Mr. Anthony Haber, the man in charge of announcing at all of the home events at Jordon High.

9. It is all clear to me. I went all over it.

questions 3-6

4. The setting fr my story is in 2009. It takes place in the following city/states: Sandy, Utah, San Antonio, Texas, And in Russia.

5. The lesson I am trying to give out is that you should never through away your dreams, and that God does everything for a reason.

6. In this story, It is going to be spoken in 3rd person.

first 3 questions.

1. The subject of this short story is a girl who makes a cluts of her self, in falling down the stairs injuring he ankle, and hitting her head, which causes her to miss the biggest swimming competition of her life. Or so she thinks. The theme in this story is going to be in Texas, but not till later on. The time period is in 2009.

2.
The plot of this story is to teach girls how to not give up on your dreams, and that God does everything for a reason.

A) The conflict in this story is that Breanna gets injured, so she can't compete in the biggest swimming competition of her life, that she knows of.

B) The main event in this story is her trip to the 2012 Olympics with her college swimming couch and actually having her family their in Russia.

C) The climax, or turning point of this story is that Breanna gets excepted into a college in San Antonio Texas, but doesn't want to go, but has to because she received a swimming scholarship.

D) This problem gets solved by her going to college in Texas, becoming one of the greatest swimmers their, and going to the 2012 Olympics.

3. My main character is Breanna. She is a indescribable young lady, who is some what of a cluts and very athletic. Haily is a charming young lady who does everything she is told. Jake is Breanna's annoying big brother, (older by two hours,) who likes the mean girl Stacy. Stacy is the mean, witch in story's like a Cinderella story, very pretty, and popular. Then their will be a girl named Gloria, who is like Breanna in away.
Their is also my minor characters like: mom, swimming couch, nurse, college students. and the people at the Olympics.

day 6 in unit 4

Author- adapted by- Marian Bray.
Lassie- Cal, Katie, and Jimmy talking.

" We don't have a phone," said Cal quietly.

"Sorry." Kaite stared at him like she didn't belive him.

" My dad has a second line at home for work," said Jimmy, quickly. " we might be able to call on it."


" But we are suposed to call after five," asked Cal. " well it's cheaper than," said Katie.



Descripive language- quietly, asked.

different dialect- ?

day 5 unit 4

Breeanna, her mom and Haily.

They are going to talk about why Bree. can't be in the swimming competition and why Breanna is stuck in the hospital.
They are going to speak very friendly, disappointed and kind of angry. They will speak in Standard English.

Breeanna- a charming Young lady who is very athletic. She loves to swim, run, and play volleyball

Her mom- a busy business woman, always leaving, some time is a stay at home.

Haily- talks alot, does everything she is told, is obsessed with animals and the enviorment.

day 4 unit 4

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" Oh hi Mrs. Lanman, How are you today?" I asked her. She replied, "Well very good, we're going to be a bit late, we're here at Dick's getting Andrew some basketball shoes. So we'll be there in a bit." we said ok, said bye, and then hung up.

the four wheels.

Wisdom- I always try to do my best in this area because I know that it is right. I know that I need to work on this area because I know I do not always to the right thing in this definition.


Stature- Is what people look at me and think about me as I grow in wisdom and favor with God. I think I am doing pretty well in this area, even though I have no idea what people think of me.


Favor w/God- I was baptized two years ago, and ever sense then, I have been growing in God. When I get scared, sad, or need help I will go right to God.


Favor w/man- I have lots of friends, but it is hard for me to talk on a stage in front of a lot of people, so I need to work on it there.

topic sentance

This girls name is Breanna. She ends up getting hurt at the biggest swim competition of the year, and can't make it which has her end up at the collage she did not want to go to in San Antonio, Texas. She makes a bunch of friend's, and what she doesn't know, her husband.

day 7 unit 3

Breeanna

Breeanna is a charming Young lady who is very athletic. She loves to swim, run, and play volleyball. She loves soccor, but doesn't have the time for it. She is a senior in high school, at Jordon High school. She end's up getting a scholarship to a athletic collage in San Antonio Texas, but doesn't take it because she is a home person, and lives in Sandy, Utah. She is very smart and pretty, and very lovable, and graceful.

day six, unit 3

Janette Oke. Loves Unfolding Dream. Paragraph 2, page 1
Her eyes quickly traveled over the slight body of young Belinda, expecting to see blood some place. Belinda’s dress, clean and neatly pressed when she had gone out just a short time before, was rumpled and dirty. One of her long, carefully plaited braids had come loose from it’d ribbon and hung in disarray about her slim shoulders. Her face was smudged and tear streaked. But to her mothers practiced eye, she seemed whole and unharmed. Marty, unconscious of the small sigh of relief that escaped her, lifted her gaze to meet blue, troubled and tear-filled eyes.


List of adjectives. verbs adverbs

plaited, gone out
rumpled and dirty, found
neatly pressed traveled, quickly
unharmed and whole, gazed
troubled and tear-filled, lifted
smudged and tear streak, see
tender heart, hung
ribbon hung in dissary, plaited, carefully
slim shoulder, come loose
got dirty, neatly

my choice ( story continued.)

Wednesday afternoon, swimming competition, Jordon High school Sandy, Utah.

"Lady's and gentle men, I have a sad announcement, Breeanna Winfield will not be able to compete this afternoon do to a serious accident." Then everyone in the crowd went huh, aw, that's to bad. Later that day,

" She's going, can she pass her, oh no Benson High has taken the lead, and today's winning trophy. Thank you Wal-Mart for supplying us the Trophy said the swimming competition's announcer.

my choice. also begining of story

Breaanna.

"Breeanna, come down here please. You need to get ready to go." shouted my mom. I said I was coming and then tripped down the stairs. OWE..............

"Where am I, what am I doing here?" "Your in the hospital. You fell down the stairs and passed out. I need to tell you this right away, the doctor said you won't be able to compete in the swimming championship contest." "What, i've trained so hard for this Wendsday, I can't not compete."

To be continued.

day 5 in unit 3

My character.

My character's name is Breanna. She is a beautiful blonde who has won many swimming trophies. She is smart and athletic, in running, and swimming. She is a graceful young lady in her last year of high school. She loves to shop and hang out with her friends at the mall. She looks like she could win the beauty contest.

day 4 in unit 3 in list form

* Adjectives

Blondie, beautiful, tall, smart, mature, graceful, girl, swimmer, shopper, runner.

yellow hair , long, brilliant, well behaved.

She swam very very fast.

she ran like lightning.

she gracefully swam to the pier.

day 2 unit 3

All about Friday.

Friday is a slave that worked really hard. He was a comely fellow, perfectly made, with tall strong limbs. Not to large, not to tall, and well shaped. About twenty six, and European. His actions were that he slaved for a man of cruelty. The author is saying that he is a man of respect for the man who saved his life. He wants people to know that he is a gentle and kind man. In my opinion. Friday's personality is one of a prince. It is thoughtful, caring, a safe. He would not eat anything without knowing it was safe. He listens to what he's told, even if it is not his master. He was in some sort of TROUBLE, when this man saved his life.

My choice

My favorite t.v. shows veterans.

In my favorite t.v. show, " I Dream of Jennie", Jennie is a gene that was rescued by Major Antony Nelson. He works for NASA with is Buddy Major Roger Helli and friends like the Bellows.

The reason I am talking about this show is because Roger and Tony our both veterans along with everyone else who works at NASA.

Some one I respect

My Parents

I will always respect my parents. My parents are the most amazing people on earth. They are wonderful people who care so much for everyone. My dad is a marvelous man, and he is a veteran because he was in the navy. My mom is a spectacular woman that worked as a secretary at a law firm until she married my dad. Now they both work together at AFLAC.

Why should americas veterans be honored.

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I think that America's veterans should be honored because they risked their lives to help save their country. So they sacrificed themselves for us. I think that America's veterans were and are some of the most bravest people alive. They also used up their valuable time to help our country.

What I think of the american veterans.

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I think that America's Veterans are some of the most bravest people to ever live. I found out that you don't have to fight in the war to become a veteran, you just have to be in the arm force's. Even if they didn't fight in the war, I still think that they were and are some of the bravest men to ever live and sacrifice their time, and lives. Two of my grandfathers were veterans, and so was my dad.

What I think it means to honor someone.

Show Respect.

I think that if you are to honor someone, you are to show them a lot of respect. Say you honor your parents, (which you should do) so you show them your honor with the respect of doing what your told the first time. Or, if there is someone older that you love and honor, show them respect by helping them with yard work and stuff like that. You shouldn't just show respect to people you know, you should show respect to everyone.