Author- adapted by- Marian Bray.
Lassie- Cal, Katie, and Jimmy talking.
" We don't have a phone," said Cal quietly.
"Sorry." Kaite stared at him like she didn't belive him.
" My dad has a second line at home for work," said Jimmy, quickly. " we might be able to call on it."
" But we are suposed to call after five," asked Cal. " well it's cheaper than," said Katie.
Descripive language- quietly, asked.
different dialect- ?
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Remember to start a new line with each change of speaker. You seem to have them all in the same paragraph.
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